Post by VH on Nov 10, 2013 8:59:46 GMT -5
Hey,
You are a talented group that are amazing at singing about reality and relationships and I've got an idea for you that you could develop into a song.
A song about the
-The Borderline between a fuck buddy and girlfriend ( fucking and loving)
It's become really popular recently in movies such as Friend's with Benefits and No Strings Attached the idea of having a fuck buddy that turns into a relationship but none of those movies really showed the real ending how it does not last. If a relationship starts as fucking, the foundation of that relationship would be because of sex. ( opinion)
The more 2 people get to know each other, the more likely feelings start to develop. Therefore there is a borderline between a fucker and a lover. Usually relationships that start like that, don' turn into true love and that's the message I want you to put across. To keep feelings separate to know the borderline. To use each other and look good but not to take it seriously. Could you please use one of the lyrics of 'you were a porn star by night and woman dressed in a suit in the light.'-just for kicks.
I hope you can get a profession lyricist to put these ideas across and you guys need to gather ideas too! To also show it from your perspective, I'm just giving you an idea from my perspective. I'd be really happy to hear it on the radio and I'm sure it could be a top hit considering the culture at the moment is very sexulaised.
Here is also some ideas how the feeling and the beat of the song could be taken from - especially the main part of the song- 'because it's tooo cloddd and now so let me hold you,' could be replaced 'becaussse there's a borderline between us here and, we can't cross it from here' - this is from the song - The Neighbourhood - Sweater Weather
www.youtube.com/watch?v=GCdwKhTtNNw
Also the way you narrate in your song ' walk away' to have that same explanatory tune- it's beautiful this song
Best of luck
please contact be through: victoriahainsworth@hotmail.co.uk
call me Vica
You are a talented group that are amazing at singing about reality and relationships and I've got an idea for you that you could develop into a song.
A song about the
-The Borderline between a fuck buddy and girlfriend ( fucking and loving)
It's become really popular recently in movies such as Friend's with Benefits and No Strings Attached the idea of having a fuck buddy that turns into a relationship but none of those movies really showed the real ending how it does not last. If a relationship starts as fucking, the foundation of that relationship would be because of sex. ( opinion)
The more 2 people get to know each other, the more likely feelings start to develop. Therefore there is a borderline between a fucker and a lover. Usually relationships that start like that, don' turn into true love and that's the message I want you to put across. To keep feelings separate to know the borderline. To use each other and look good but not to take it seriously. Could you please use one of the lyrics of 'you were a porn star by night and woman dressed in a suit in the light.'-just for kicks.
I hope you can get a profession lyricist to put these ideas across and you guys need to gather ideas too! To also show it from your perspective, I'm just giving you an idea from my perspective. I'd be really happy to hear it on the radio and I'm sure it could be a top hit considering the culture at the moment is very sexulaised.
Here is also some ideas how the feeling and the beat of the song could be taken from - especially the main part of the song- 'because it's tooo cloddd and now so let me hold you,' could be replaced 'becaussse there's a borderline between us here and, we can't cross it from here' - this is from the song - The Neighbourhood - Sweater Weather
www.youtube.com/watch?v=GCdwKhTtNNw
Also the way you narrate in your song ' walk away' to have that same explanatory tune- it's beautiful this song
Best of luck
please contact be through: victoriahainsworth@hotmail.co.uk
call me Vica
